Teaching page · Grade 2 · Lesson 35
Explanatory — Draft the ending
The ending tells the reader the piece is finished, usually by returning to what it was about.
What it is
An ending is not a summary. Repeating what you just said insults a reader who has only just read it. A real ending answers the question so what? — it tells your reader what to do with the thing they now understand, or shows them the bigger thing it is part of.
Watch it built
1Here is the summary ending, which adds nothing.
So that is how a seed becomes a plant.
2Ask so what? — what does knowing this let a reader see?
That the plant was already whole inside the seed.
3Write that instead.
Nothing was added to the seed but water, warmth, and light. Everything else was already inside it.
Remember
Not a summary. Answer so what?
Ask yourself: “Would a reader know this is the end?”
Remember
An ending is not just stopping.
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