Explanatory — Revise for language

Teacher edition · Grade 3 · Lesson 35 · Road-map project
Writing Book 3 · sheet 74
Revising is changing words, not fixing spelling.

2. Your turn

On the worksheet: revise for language for your own piece, double-spaced so there is room to correct.
Below is what a full, correct answer looks like. Children's wording will differ and should — mark the thing this lesson taught, not everything at once.
Read the one sentence you are most sure of.model — accept any answer that does the same job

3. Before you finish

Read the one sentence you are most sure of.
Watch forSet a number: change three words, no more. Open revision produces nothing at this age.