| Slide — what is on it | What you SAY | What happens, and why |
|---|---|---|
| Slide 1 LAUNCH Writing — Day 5 | (nothing yet — this is up as they come in and settle) | Have Writing — Day 5 up before they enter. Say nothing about it.Same slide every lesson, number only changes. It marks the transition into writing before you speak, which saves you having to. Students: See it on the way in. Know writing is next. |
| Slide 2 LAUNCH A whole page, unassisted | “This is how we set our hand and our page up to write.” | CONTEXT — say where this lesson sits: what it follows, and what it is part of. One sentence. The children should know what kind of work is starting.Context, not a hook. A child who knows what KIND of lesson this is spends no attention working it out. Students: Listen. Orient. |
| Slide 3 LAUNCH Today
›› Launch
I Do
We Do
Read
You Do
Closure | “Here is what we will do today.” | Point to Launch once. Do not explain the others. · Retrieval on MWB · 3-5 minMini-whiteboards: Retrieval on MWB Students: Look. |
| Slide 4 LAUNCH Set up and fill a complete notes page independently. | “Set up and fill a complete notes page independently.” | PURPOSE — say it slowly, in these words. The teacher objective in the header is for you; this is the version the class hears.Never read a teacher objective to children. The version in the brief header is written for you and is too long and too abstract to say to a class; this one is what they hear. Students: Listen. |
| No slide LAUNCH WHY — SAY IT
ten seconds, off screen, in your own words | “What is done for the benefit of a future moment is done twice.” | Why this matters. Say it, do not read it. Ten seconds, then move on.Your words, not these. This is the one beat of the lesson that should sound like you mean it rather than like it is written down. Students: Listen. |
| Slide 5 LAUNCH What we will do
Heading, margin, three levels and topic words, all together, without prompting. | “Heading, margin, three levels and topic words, all together, without prompting.” | Click once per line. Do not elaborate. Students: Listen. |
| Slide 6 I DO Today
Launch
›› I Do
We Do
Read
You Do
Closure | “Now we i do.” | Point to I Do once. Do not explain the others. · 3-4 minMini-whiteboards: NOT here — they watch, they do not write. Writing during I DO is how the model gets missed. Students: Look. |
| No slide I DO (board — build the VIP, then leave it up) | (you are narrating each stage as you build it) | Build on the BOARD, not the slide. Teacher shows a finished exemplar page and names each feature. Then leave it up for the whole lesson.One click per step. The footsteps are never erased — the same strip is printed at the top of their sheet, so come back to it if anyone stalls. Students: Watch it being built. It stays there to look at. |
| Slide 7 I DO The test
“Would this page still make sense to me next week?” | “Here is the question we ask ourselves: “Would this page still make sense to me next week?”” | Say it, then apply it aloud to the example already on the board.WHY IT WORKS — you will be asked: Individual habits are checkable but the whole page is what matters, and the real test is time — notes that work today and not next week were never notes. That standard also happens to be the one that survives into secondary school. Students: Listen, then say the test back. |
| Slide 8 WE DO Today
Launch
I Do
›› We Do
Read
You Do
Closure | “Now we we do.” | Point to We Do once. Do not explain the others. · PRIMARY MWB use · 5-6 minMini-whiteboards: PRIMARY MWB use Students: Look. |
| Slide 9 WE DO Together | “Now with me.” | Class lists the features that must appear before starting.Take answers from boards, not from hands — that is how you see all thirty. Students: Answer on boards. |
| Slide 10 READ Today
Launch
I Do
We Do
›› Read
You Do
Closure | “Now we read.” | Point to Read once. Do not explain the others.Mini-whiteboards: NOT here — they watch, they do not write. Writing during I DO is how the model gets missed. Students: Look. |
| Slide 11 READ Writing Book 4, p.44 | “Open Writing Book 4 to page 44.” | Read it with them — FASE or teacher read-aloud, never round robin. Stop at the worked example and let them look at it.Our own book, not a purchased one — so it can be printed, edited and improved, and there is no license on it. Students: Follow along. Read when asked. |
| Slide 12 YOU DO Today
Launch
I Do
We Do
Read
›› You Do
Closure | “Now we you do.” | Point to You Do once. Do not explain the others. · Written on the sheet · 4-5 minMini-whiteboards: Written on the sheet Students: Look. |
| Slide 13 YOU DO Set up and complete a full notes page: heading, margin words, three-level outline. | “Set up and complete a full notes page: heading, margin words, three-level outline.” | Set them off. Walk the rows. Correct the grip and the setup, not the content, in the first minute. Students: Work in the notebook. |
| Slide 14 CLOSURE Today
Launch
I Do
We Do
Read
You Do
›› Closure | “Now we closure.” | Point to Closure once. Do not explain the others. · Display answers on MWB · 2-3 minMini-whiteboards: Display answers on MWB Students: Look. |
| Slide 15 CLOSURE Hand in the page with every feature present. | “Hand in the page with every feature present.” | Exit Direction. Take it from every child before anyone stands.It belongs to today's content — it is how you know who has it. Students: Answer, then pack away. |
| Slide 16 CLOSURE A whole page, unassisted. | “A whole page, unassisted.” | Say it once. Leave it on screen as they pack away.The anchor — the one line you want them to still have tomorrow. Students: Hear it. Repeat it if asked. |