Explanatory — Revise for language

Teacher edition · Grade 5 · Lesson 33 · Road-map project

Writing Book 5 · sheet 72

Revising changes words. Editing fixes mistakes.

2. Your turn

In your notebook: revise for language for your own piece, double-spaced so there is room to correct.

Below is what a full, correct answer looks like. Children's wording will differ and should — mark the thing this lesson taught, not everything at once.

Read the one sentence you are most sure of.model — accept any answer that does the same job

3. Before you finish

Read the one sentence you are most sure of.

Watch forPoint them at the collocation lists. 'A better word' is vague; 'the pairing we learned' is not.