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Grade 6 · Lesson 18 — Metaphors and idioms — bring the words back

Academic language · Metaphors and idioms · using them · blocked · 30 minutes · 25 slides · Launch → I do → We do → Read → You do → Closure
The language behind this lesson — read this before you teach it.
METAPHORS AND IDIOMS

What it is. You have met these and used them; now you use them where they actually belong.

Why our test works. The Grade 6 failure is not ignorance but settling: a child reaches for the word they already own rather than the one the sentence needs, and the writing stays where it was. Naming that habit is most of the cure, because the child can usually retrieve the better word once asked.

Leans on. Grades 4 and 5 built the habit of reaching past the first word that came to mind. Grade 6 asks it of longer phrases.

Watch for. On a first meeting, accept a rough use. Precision is asked for in the next two lessons, not this one.

What this lesson is

Match 8 academic words to their everyday partners and use each in a sentence frame. The worked example is built on The rule is a double-edged sword., ringing a double-edged sword. The class reads Writing Book 6, p.57 — our own page, so a child who was absent can still get the lesson.

Why it matters — say this in your own words, about ten seconds.
“An image can carry a thought further than an explanation.”
A different reason every lesson, on purpose. It is not on a slide and it is not a script — if you have a better reason today, use yours. What should land is the idea, not a sentence they can recite.
How it goes

You open by saying where this sits — what it follows and what it is part of — in one sentence, and then you give them the reason it matters, in your own words, for about ten seconds. Before anything new, sixty seconds of retrieval on U6 set 1: ask, take the answers from boards rather than hands so you see all thirty, and do not re-teach — note who has lost it and carry on.

Then you do one yourself, on screen, one click per piece: the word a double-edged sword alone first, and you wait — let them look at it before you give them the meaning. Then good and bad both arrives beside it, and you point from one to the other with your hand. Then the sentence underneath: The rule is a double-edged sword.. Three clicks, three things said. Do not let the whole slide arrive at once — a slide that arrives whole gives the answer before the question is asked.

The We-do is the main whiteboard moment of the lesson — short answers, boards up on your signal, every child visible at once. Class matches each item to its partner aloud, then uses the frames in pairs. Every child says at least one frame. If the answer is a whole sentence rather than a word, take it on their notebooks instead, because a sentence written on a whiteboard is written once and destroyed.

They open Writing Book 6 to page 57 and read it with you. Stop at the worked example and let them look at it.

Exit directions in full, standing still, before anyone moves. Then they work alone through the five steps — match, choose, frame, write their own. The frames stay on screen while they write: You may use the frame for two of your three. Try the third without it. Say both halves of that — the frame is there if they need it, and it is better writing without it. Walk and note who used it; that is your group for tomorrow, not a mark against them today.

You close on the exit direction — Say one sentence using a double-edged sword. — taken from every child before anyone stands, and then the line you want them to still have tomorrow: A stumbling block, a grey area, the tip of the iceberg.

Exit directions — in full, standing still, before anyone moves
Sheet and pencil · Read the word bank BEFORE you fill any gap · Fill every gap, then write your own sentences
Watch for

On a first meeting, accept a rough use. Precision is asked for in the next two lessons, not this one.

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