Explanatory — Revise for language

Teacher edition · Grade 6 · Lesson 32 · Road-map project
Writing Book 6 · sheet 71
One pass per problem, all the way through.

2. Your turn

In your notebook: revise for language for your own piece, double-spaced so there is room to correct.
Below is what a full, correct answer looks like. Children's wording will differ and should — mark the thing this lesson taught, not everything at once.
Read the one sentence you are most sure of.model — accept any answer that does the same job

3. Before you finish

Read the one sentence you are most sure of.
Watch forRevising on screen produces tinkering. Print it.