What it is. A figure of speech that everyone uses has stopped carrying an image and become furniture.
Why our test works. By Grade 8 the danger has reversed. In Grade 6 the risk was not knowing these phrases; now it is reaching for them automatically — *a paradigm shift* applied to a minor change, *the crux of the matter* used as filler. The test is deliberately uncomfortable, because a writer who cannot say why they needed a phrase is using it as decoration, and at this level decoration is read as thinness.
Leans on. Grade 6 met metaphor and idiom. Grade 8 learns restraint with them.
Watch for. A well-placed figure is worth a paragraph. Three in a page means none of them is working. Count them.
Use 12 school words in sentences of your own, and choose which version suits who is reading. The worked example is built on The theory caused a paradigm shift., ringing a paradigm shift. The class reads Writing Book 8, p.57 — our own page, so a child who was absent can still get the lesson.
You open by saying where this sits — what it follows and what it is part of — in one sentence, and then you give them the reason it matters, in your own words, for about ten seconds. Before anything new, sixty seconds of retrieval on U6 set 1, U9 set 1: ask, take the answers from boards rather than hands so you see all thirty, and do not re-teach — note who has lost it and carry on.
Then you do one yourself, on screen, one click per piece: the word a paradigm shift alone first, and you wait — let them look at it before you give them the meaning. Then a complete change of view arrives beside it, and you point from one to the other with your hand. Then the sentence underneath: The theory caused a paradigm shift.. Three clicks, three things said. Do not let the whole slide arrive at once — a slide that arrives whole gives the answer before the question is asked.
The We-do is the main whiteboard moment of the lesson — short answers, boards up on your signal, every child visible at once. Class rewrites two everyday sentences into school-word, then judges one case where the everyday version is BETTER. Discuss in pairs using the frames. If the answer is a whole sentence rather than a word, take it on their notebooks instead, because a sentence written on a whiteboard is written once and destroyed.
They open Writing Book 8 to page 57 and read it with you. Stop at the worked example and let them look at it.
Exit directions in full, standing still, before anyone moves. Then they work alone through the five steps — match, choose, frame, write their own. The frames stay on screen while they write: Only one of yours may use the frame. Choose which one needs it. Say both halves of that — the frame is there if they need it, and it is better writing without it. Walk and note who used it; that is your group for tomorrow, not a mark against them today.
You close on the exit direction — Say one sentence using a paradigm shift. — taken from every child before anyone stands, and then the line you want them to still have tomorrow: If everyone writes it, it is no longer an image.
A well-placed figure is worth a paragraph. Three in a page means none of them is working. Count them.