Explanatory — Revise for language

Teacher edition · Grade 8 · Lesson 30 · Road-map project

Writing Book 8 · sheet 69

Revise for the argument first, the sentences second.

2. Your turn

In your notebook: revise for language for your own piece, double-spaced so there is room to correct.

Below is what a full, correct answer looks like. Children's wording will differ and should — mark the thing this lesson taught, not everything at once.

Read the one sentence you are most sure of.model — accept any answer that does the same job

3. Before you finish

Read the one sentence you are most sure of.

Watch forPrint it. A child revising on a screen tinkers with sentences and never reaches the structure.